Warning: This article contain spoilers.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. The author has never asked me or tried to influence me for a positive review, nor have I promised one.
Overall, I enjoyed most of the book and will definitely be reading the sequel.
It took almost half the book for the plot to become apparent, especially to the main character. It was a bit inconceivable that a man with no business experience could save his family’s business so quickly, as some reviewers have noted. However, most of the problems were related to the bills not being paid. The story takes place over many months yet it takes many months for the quest to even start. I almost gave up. Glad I held out since the story quickly picked up the pace.
Linvin is a bit cocky but at least he has the experience to back it up. He struggles with making the right decisions because of this cockiness. However, being the outsider among relatives and town’s folk for so long could make anyone’s tolerance to ill-treatment become low. Rander is rather childish and annoying. He’s truly a brat that his parents failed to discipline. Poor Bander is so gullible and has been following everything his brother has told him his whole life. Inside though, he is a kind likable soul. Anvar is one of those people who you trust only because he is family. He is always keeping some secret it seems.
The writing was pretty good overall. The story really drew me in once it actually got into it. No detail over-kill though maybe too much story development in the beginning.
About the Author:
Rival Gates started this story at the tender age of 13 but never shared his story with anyone but family. When his mother, his biggest supporter, was diagnosed with cancer, she made him promise to publish his work and finishing the series. He is now bringing this promise to fruition.